Friday, January 28, 2011

Absence



In my dream
our mother's gone missing
for two days since,
her absence palpable thus -

First, is nowhere to be found
in an unfamiliar house
where our familiar wait
until the scene's unraveled to

Next, flying above a possible route
like a camera speeding forward
searching for her last known place
but, before a trace is felt -

Morning arrives,
in this familiar house,
dulled by her absence,

Nine years and counting.

2 comments:

Khakjaan Wessington said...

Mm, at first I thought the syntax was just sloppy, but by the middle, I saw how you were using it to jump as we do in dreams. Clever. Good one.

Panache said...

Yeah nice order from chaos!!!!
http://piecesofkarp.blogspot.com/

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