Friday, January 28, 2011
Absence
In my dream
our mother's gone missing
for two days since,
her absence palpable thus -
First, is nowhere to be found
in an unfamiliar house
where our familiar wait
until the scene's unraveled to
Next, flying above a possible route
like a camera speeding forward
searching for her last known place
but, before a trace is felt -
Morning arrives,
in this familiar house,
dulled by her absence,
Nine years and counting.
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2 comments:
Mm, at first I thought the syntax was just sloppy, but by the middle, I saw how you were using it to jump as we do in dreams. Clever. Good one.
Yeah nice order from chaos!!!!
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