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greeting from Malaysia =)

2011-12-28T17:10:15.435-08:00

greeting from Malaysia =)

Tres bien.

2011-11-23T19:40:26.375-08:00

Tres bien.

Very clean poem. I loved the pacing. Nice. :D

2011-10-14T19:28:49.201-07:00

Very clean poem. I loved the pacing. Nice. :D

"The dead hour, quiet but for the desires swi...

2011-09-09T13:14:35.493-07:00

"The dead hour, quiet
but for the desires
swimming in the room."

Love that! and ...

"Oh, the things you'll do
to make them go away.
The things you wish to do..."

Really like this one! Nice writing . :-)

Very beautiful poem, the garden is actually lined ...

2011-08-21T09:53:46.959-07:00

Very beautiful poem, the garden is actually lined with roses, maybe not to the extend as it was in your dream, sometimes reality and dream blurred.

Sis

Kayin - I've missed my twitter friends and poe...

2011-08-03T21:03:35.329-07:00

Kayin - I've missed my twitter friends and poet friends, like you. I'm back for a while! This is a beautiful poem - and evokes images of my mother and my grandmother...and briefly, they come back to me.

what a pretty poem

2011-07-21T03:57:16.910-07:00

what a pretty poem

Very poignant and much to be pondered in the symbo...

2011-07-18T02:05:03.047-07:00

Very poignant and much to be pondered in the symbolism here.

The line "The circle is worn to a trench now" is very powerful and struck such a chord with me.

Nice writing Kandy, and thanks very much for your visit, it is always good to see you. x

I agree. It's probably because I haven't d...

2011-07-06T22:35:25.859-07:00

I agree. It's probably because I haven't decided yet, being a subject that I'm trying to process, mixing truths and taking poetic liberty. Thank you for your suggestions. I need more time to sit down and go further with it, and not when it's so late at night and I'm tired. K

I have a few of these. I wss doing it straight at ...

2011-07-06T22:30:24.720-07:00

I have a few of these. I wss doing it straight at first but ended up playing with the forms to add more textures to them. I hope that people will also feel free to play with how they would like to read this poem.

My instinct would be to distill both of these poem...

2011-07-06T13:17:26.726-07:00

My instinct would be to distill both of these poems to a few great stanzas. As they stand, I feel there's a lot of stuff that borders on cliche which you can trim. I really love the 2nd & 3rd stanzas of the original, and the 5th stanza of the rewrite. If you combine these three parts, maybe expand on them without spelling too much out, I think you could have a killer piece.

It's beach season - I like the tumbling back a...

2011-07-05T19:28:40.259-07:00

It's beach season - I like the tumbling back and forth, the repetition/reflection of your poem. We pick up the smooth things and wonder, sometimes, what they once were. We pick up and share shells, casually drop them back down. That's us in the vastness - ephemera.

Thanks Susannah!

2011-05-09T12:13:49.586-07:00

Thanks Susannah!

Oooh, I LOVE this one! Nice writing!

2011-05-09T01:15:38.356-07:00

Oooh, I LOVE this one! Nice writing!

Late night poetry FTW!

2011-04-26T11:31:47.017-07:00

Late night poetry FTW!

Thanks Susannah

2011-04-13T21:47:20.878-07:00

Thanks Susannah

Beautiful. :-)

2011-04-11T13:28:28.448-07:00

Beautiful. :-)

Oh nice. Pleasantly dark, but begging for some lig...

2011-03-19T07:28:47.021-07:00

Oh nice. Pleasantly dark, but begging for some light.

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This has a sense of bleakness about it, as though ...

2011-03-11T00:58:56.329-08:00

This has a sense of bleakness about it, as though vast space and a sense of deep contemplation are wrapped in your words.

Nice writing Kayin.

Yeah nice order from chaos!!!! http://piecesofkarp...

2011-02-11T23:29:50.946-08:00

Yeah nice order from chaos!!!!
http://piecesofkarp.blogspot.com/

Ah thanks sis! Dinner's my treat!

2011-02-04T22:17:29.110-08:00

Ah thanks sis! Dinner's my treat!

You use words like an artist with a paint brush! ...

2011-02-04T22:06:24.878-08:00

You use words like an artist with a paint brush!

Sis

Mm, at first I thought the syntax was just sloppy,...

2011-01-28T22:59:30.798-08:00

Mm, at first I thought the syntax was just sloppy, but by the middle, I saw how you were using it to jump as we do in dreams. Clever. Good one.